Poor Kratos, having to suffer through hitting the woman he loved. v.v I hope she can forgive him. Great chapter. You introduced Noishe into the Kratos/Anna escapade excellently, it flowed perfectly with the rest of the story. As the others said, it was tense. Especially during the countdown to the exit of the ranch,I was expecting them to be caught just as they were a step from freedom. Thank God they weren't. I was a little alte reading this since my Friends' page is giving me a hard time, but better late than never. ^_^ I really like this story, on a whole.
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Date: 2006-08-18 07:12 pm (UTC)Great chapter. You introduced Noishe into the Kratos/Anna escapade excellently, it flowed perfectly with the rest of the story.
As the others said, it was tense. Especially during the countdown to the exit of the ranch,I was expecting them to be caught just as they were a step from freedom. Thank God they weren't.
I was a little alte reading this since my Friends' page is giving me a hard time, but better late than never. ^_^ I really like this story, on a whole.