Thanks! Unfortunately for me, that was probably the easiest chapter to write, as far as Anna's experiences are concerned. It's going to keep on coming back. Here's to hoping I can keep handling it well.
I tried to be as subtle as possible (and I made sure each little scene had weeks between it), because of "show not tell" and all. Language is probably what I'm exploiting the most (for example, you no doubt noticed how Kratos went from thinking about her from "the host body" to "the woman" to "Anna," although I did a few other things as well), but yeah. I'm happy to hear you think I pulled it off. ♥
And I'm so glad you like it. ^_^ I know I've done a good job if I've managed to impress you this much.
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Date: 2006-07-30 01:12 am (UTC)I tried to be as subtle as possible (and I made sure each little scene had weeks between it), because of "show not tell" and all. Language is probably what I'm exploiting the most (for example, you no doubt noticed how Kratos went from thinking about her from "the host body" to "the woman" to "Anna," although I did a few other things as well), but yeah. I'm happy to hear you think I pulled it off. ♥
And I'm so glad you like it. ^_^ I know I've done a good job if I've managed to impress you this much.