Initially I shipped Pascal/Cheria as a "pair the spares" sort of joke, but reading this fic made me more serious about the pairing. (As serious as shipping can ever be, anyway. ...which is actually pretty serious, considering fandom, but you know I try not to go there. :D;;) You make me so disappointed that this pairing isn't actually canon, sigh. I'd love to see how Cheria got to the point of falling in love with Pascal (HINT HINT), but more general relationship shenanigans like this would be (s)excellent too. (And if you somehow manage to work this into Malikahverse, that'd be hilariously awesome as well. I'M NOT ASKING FOR MUCH HERE, OKAY OKAY.) Porn is not necessary but would certainly be a tasty bonus, since despite your admitted rustiness I think you did a fine enough job here. :D
And I think this --
and then when her climax came, she nearly forgot her, too, but not quite, so that Pascal could come right along with her, hollering her head off.
-- is my favorite line of the fic. Pascal in the middle of sex would bring all the noise complaints to the yard, wouldn't she. (Now I'm imagining Hubert overhearing Pascal in one of her more ecstatic moments, whether it be caused by baths or...something else. That poor kid. THIS IS ALSO TOTALLY NOT A HINT, BY THE WAY. NOPE. NOTHING ABOUT THAT SENTENCE AT ALL COULD EVER BE CONSTRUED AS A SUGGESTION FOR ANOTHER FIC.) It also builds on another thing (out of many!) that I like about this fic, which is how Pascal retains her characteristic playfulness and silliness for teh sexytiems. I have to wonder whether she, ahem, studied up on sex, if you know what I mean.
I also love how Cheria plays the "adult" in the relationship, yet it's still clear by the end of things that it's not a one-sided deal. Pascal looks after Cheria, too, in her own Pascalian way. Really, Pascal does for Cheria what she'd theoretically do for Hubert in a relationship: she helps the both of them to just chill out a bit.
TL;DR this is now one of my favorite fics by you, right beneath the D&G one you wrote for my birthday. 8DDDD
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OKAY NO FOR REALS NOW
Date: 2012-10-09 04:22 am (UTC)Initially I shipped Pascal/Cheria as a "pair the spares" sort of joke, but reading this fic made me more serious about the pairing. (As serious as shipping can ever be, anyway. ...which is actually pretty serious, considering fandom, but you know I try not to go there. :D;;) You make me so disappointed that this pairing isn't actually canon, sigh. I'd love to see how Cheria got to the point of falling in love with Pascal (HINT HINT), but more general relationship shenanigans like this would be (s)excellent too. (And if you somehow manage to work this into Malikahverse, that'd be hilariously awesome as well. I'M NOT ASKING FOR MUCH HERE, OKAY OKAY.) Porn is not necessary but would certainly be a tasty bonus, since despite your admitted rustiness I think you did a fine enough job here. :D
And I think this --
and then when her climax came, she nearly forgot her, too, but not quite, so that Pascal could come right along with her, hollering her head off.
-- is my favorite line of the fic. Pascal in the middle of sex would bring all the noise complaints to the yard, wouldn't she. (Now I'm imagining Hubert overhearing Pascal in one of her more ecstatic moments, whether it be caused by baths or...something else. That poor kid. THIS IS ALSO TOTALLY NOT A HINT, BY THE WAY. NOPE. NOTHING ABOUT THAT SENTENCE AT ALL COULD EVER BE CONSTRUED AS A SUGGESTION FOR ANOTHER FIC.) It also builds on another thing (out of many!) that I like about this fic, which is how Pascal retains her characteristic playfulness and silliness for teh sexytiems. I have to wonder whether she, ahem, studied up on sex, if you know what I mean.
I also love how Cheria plays the "adult" in the relationship, yet it's still clear by the end of things that it's not a one-sided deal. Pascal looks after Cheria, too, in her own Pascalian way. Really, Pascal does for Cheria what she'd theoretically do for Hubert in a relationship: she helps the both of them to just chill out a bit.
TL;DR this is now one of my favorite fics by you, right beneath the D&G one you wrote for my birthday. 8DDDD