Aww, I think this is sweet! I like that even awakened!Grune has her doubts and insecurities, and that Dhaos is willing and patient to do for her what she unknowingly did for him. I agree that maybe it's one of your rougher pieces, but I think that gives the piece a nice touch of verisimilitude with regards to this snapshot of Dhaos' own feelings.
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Date: 2012-08-02 10:31 pm (UTC)